Joey Drake - 1 verse & hook over Smile beat

[malek_5]

kind of old beat, but i made up a chorus and laid a verse down. comments on whether my voice should be up an octave or not (in rapping) appreciated. still trying to find a comfortable voice level that sounds good.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=584796

 

[Shot 21]

Chorus sounds a bit weird but the verse is good. Nice flow and the delivery is good as well. Overall Im liking it. You need to get another 2 verses on it!