JeSTAR- The Whole Half of Me (Soundclick)

[jeremy_]

replied to Crittaz, Shot 21 and Limn.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=221700&songID=3248569

 

[Shot 21]

Nice deep track. Cool beat. you ride it well. Like what youre saying. The chorus is simple but catchy. Like how your just talking bout stuff that happened rather than story-telling. "I cringed at the flow" I think we all relate to you thir. I HATED my first track. Cringed every time I heard it.

Great track. Great job. Keep it up.

 

[Bigg Limn]

I like that melody, but not diggin the drums. Levels need 2 be tweaked a bit, vocals sound a bit low. Flows solid. Hooks pretty nice, I like that. Not a bad track, but Id still like to see you complicate your rhyme scheme/flow a bit.

pz

 

[FUK_BADBOY]

its cool

 

[A.B.R.]

Really laid back, beat an lyrics are cool.