JeSTAR - Middle Child (Feat. Naomi)

[jeremy_]

Replied to: Y G B youngbugzy, DChesron and Limn

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/jestarmusic.htm

This is off my first EP which is recorded and will be released next week after a few touch ups. If there are any minor aspects of this that need work please let me know and I will correct them.

Anyway, let me know what you think of the track overall!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/jestarmusic.htm

Middle Child (Feat. Naomi)

 

[Rukas]

Three replies.

 

[Chronic]

Three replies.

http://www.2pacboard.com/forum/thread124178.html

Might want to edit Limn's post

 

[Rukas]

Ahh Limn made it two, Ok didnt know. Wont step on his toes ...

 

[Bigg Limn]

Yeah I figured two was sufficient enough, especially since the board was just starting back up when I posted that.

 

[imported_MAKaveli_10]

That was hot. I thought the beat was really nice. I thought your flow was real good on this beat. The chorus with the girl singing on it was nice as well. Your rhymes were really good. The production on your EP is real professional. I might change up your intro to the track. bu thats about it. I loved that song 9 out of ten.

 

[Bigg Limn]

Beat is sounding nice, I love pianos. Intro is nice. Damn, beat is a letdown to the piano. Club-type beat with a nice soulful piano=no no. Ur flow is solid. Delivery is good, got some good emotion in it. Pronounciation gets a bit slurred in some parts, but overall its nice. Don't like the small gaps between the verse/hook - need somethin to fill it in to make the song flow smoother. Hook is alright, singing is a bit off beat - she fits the piano well though. Lyrics are pretty basic structure-wise, but the content is nice, feelin it. Decent track...got a lot of potential, could use more effort/work in the actualy song aspect of it - verses were solid though.

Peace

 

[jeremy_]

Thanks for the feedback!

 

[jeremy_]

That was hot. I thought the beat was really nice. I thought your flow was real good on this beat. The chorus with the girl singing on it was nice as well. Your rhymes were really good. The production on your EP is real professional. I might change up your intro to the track. bu thats about it. I loved that song 9 out of ten.

would you recommend removing the sample totaly or replacing it with another?

 

[Sith Angel]

the piano touch on the beat is tite, I love that. but the beat by it self ain't mush. it's a let down.
Delivery was real nice, I love to feel emotion in rap music and you come nice on a few parts.
The Pronunciation gets a little sloppy in parts but nothing to worry about.
I like the singing. she sounds hot but a little offbeat. maybe you might wanna go and put her on the beat better or something, I don't know. but it sounds alright.

Over all, it was a nice track. just a few things needs to be fixed and thats it.
Keep dropping. oh and don't forget to rep and return the post.

Pz

 

[jeremy_]

thanks Sith Angel, i replied to your drop.

 

[pablo escabar]

nice female back up,not sure about the okka darrel kerrigan vocal style,i like my hip hop vocals a bit more grunty or raspy,

 

[jeremy_]

lol at the okka comment. thanks for your feedback though.

 

[Sith Angel]

thanks Sith Angel, i replied to your drop.

Np!

 

[bigCASH]

pretty decent track...good luck with the album

 

[linx]

Loving the piano shit, I can never get enough of that. The drums are iffy. I also was like "wtf?" when your first verse ended. It just kind of ended "just like that". The singing sounds really dope. Ol girl is really nice with it. As long as you step your rhymes up a bit, you'll be making some even doper shit in no time.

 

[malek_5]

Another good intro. I like your flow a lot better on this song compared to 'This Frequency'. I'd put in some harder drums though, it's real soft on that, but I like the piano. The hook sounds nice.