JeSTAR - Hazey Dreams (Soundclick)

[jeremy_]

replied to Rukas and Limn

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/jestarmusic.htm
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/jestarmusic.htm

It's the top most track - called "Hazey Dreams"

Again just a few verses that i needed to express. Let me know what you think.

Beat is "2Pac - You Can B Touched", instrumental Looped by Kamikazi

 

[SkitzoFreniak]

beat ofcourse is nice , for sum reason i liked ur other drop
better , but that doesnt mean that this one is bad,
pretty good pressence on the mic , emotion is okay,
lyrics pretty "normal" , so overall good track but nuthin
amazing , keep em comin , pz

 

[imported_MAKaveli_10]

I agree that it was a good track but it could be better.

 

[jeremy_]

I agree that it was a good track but it could be better.

thanks for you indepth feedback.

 

[Bigg Limn]

Beat's nice and chilled, lil poor quality. Flow is on point, solid throughout the entirity. Delivery is kinda lacking though...you not really flowing w/ the beat, u just stayin on beat. So work on ur rhythm more. Not feelin ya voice, just preference. Accent isn't that bad, and ur prnounciation is pretty clear. Levels need 2 be upped on the vocals a bit though, some lines R hard 2 catch. Lyrics are aiight, not 2 complex - but the subject matter is nice. Not a bad drop, keep elevatin.

Peace

 

[Ant]

Beat is nice, although the quality of it doesn't really sound up to scratch... snare sounds pretty shit to me. Accent? You Australian? Sounds ok. Lyrics are ok, pretty basic, but they work ok. Flow is pretty nice too. It's not a bad drop.

 

[jeremy_]

Beat is nice, although the quality of it doesn't really sound up to scratch... snare sounds pretty shit to me. Accent? You Australian? Sounds ok. Lyrics are ok, pretty basic, but they work ok. Flow is pretty nice too. It's not a bad drop.

Kiwi