JeSTAR- Day After Day (Soundclick)

[jeremy_]

JeSTAR - Day After Day (Soundclick)

replied to SkitzoFreniak, PhoeniX CrookedCross

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/jestarmusic.htm

its the only track there. let me know what you think.

Day After Day

 

[SkitzoFreniak]

beat is nice man , flow u used wus pretty basic but
it worked well for this beat , but this isnt even
a finished song so finish it up first man , wut u have so
far is okay

 

[jeremy_]

beat is nice man , flow u used wus pretty basic but
it worked well for this beat , but this isnt even
a finished song so finish it up first man , wut u have so
far is okay

beat is by Eminem. From 'Til the End' by Lloyd Banks.

It is finished - was never going to be a whole song, just a verse i needed to express.

 

[imported_MAKaveli_10]

I liked that verse. Maybe you should finish the whole song. i love that beat.

 

[Mr P-nis]

the flow sounds like Eazy E style, but try to fit the words better, cause then you come tighter! Further the song is good, bro!

 

[Bigg Limn]

Beat's nice, Eminem actually sounded a bit different on this beat...didn't think he could do it. Flow is on point again, but its still a bit stiff. Lyrics were pretty simple on this one, not really vibin 2 the subject matter 2 much tho. Vocal levels R better on this one, was easier 2 catch the lines. Work on ur delivery and the complexity of your lyrics a bit and ur shit will be that much tighter.

Peace