Jaydah - Gangsta

[luciano24]

http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=2330599&q=Hi

just thought i would get some feedback on this...its not mixed down yet so the quality lacks a little bit...we finished this like 10 mins before i ripped it on cd. Thanks

 

[imported_MAKaveli_10]

its fucked. It aint working.

 

[luciano24]

go to soundclick.com/luciano24 its the only one on there

 

[imported_MAKaveli_10]

That beat is really hot. I find it really good. It goes really for the song. Your flow is pretty nice and this sounds very professional. I really like that chorus. Your rhymes are good and are solid for the whole song. Your best verse was the 2nd verse. Overall this song is really nice. I give it a 8.5 out of 10.

 

[luciano24]

this isn't mine but is a freind of mine.. we are working on the rest of the album now

 

[Hussein Da Don]

This track was nice yo...I like the beat on the real...nice flow kid

 

[Bigg Limn]

Beats alright...a bit simple/repetetive. Flow is solid, delivery is pretty boring though - as well as the content. Rhyme scheme was pretty basic as well. Song structure is solid, but not my type of track.

Peace

 

[Quasimodo]

hey yo... that beat is hot.. wherever yall get the production, its nice as hell..

i like jaydah.. he's nice... its gonna be tight when we get up on a track together... his style is nice, but he's your typical southern emcee.. he needs something that sets him apart... he's nice though, don't get me wrong, i like him.. i feel him... i'd love to do a track with him!

 

[Advocate]

buddy you have a dope voice man, really feeling it on the track, the beat is hot too and your working on it nicely. flowling is on man, its just an appealing sounding track and that isn't the easiest thing to acheive but it is so important. fairly simple rhyming, sounds almost a little southern. "this aint no game or habit, this is life, you heard me damit" dope shit man, im hella feeling this actually, keep it up, looking out for more of your shit.

advocate

 

[CoolWaterz]

this isn't mine but is a freind of mine.. we are working on the rest of the album now

hows your friend gonna call himself "jaydah".....

 

[Sith Angel]

The beat is hot as fuck, I love these dark style of beats.
He sounds like a typical southern Mc, a nice deep ruff voice and flow is solid as fuck.
I love the hook, a nice feel to it.
This is really a tite track. I'm loving his style.
get at him and ask if he wants to collabo. Send me a PM and we'll sort some shit out.

In whole this is a real tite track.
You gotta drop some more of his stuff on here.

Don't forget to rep and holla back on my new shit when I finally get around to drop it.

Pz

 

[luciano24]

hows your friend gonna call himself "jaydah".....

because thats his name thats why

 

[bigCASH]

i'd give it an 7.5/10 and to me that's really good because in my opinion i think it's dam near impossible to get a 10/10 and a 9/10 is on some shit like your lyrics have to be top notch....you know...everything has to be fire...hot punches hot metaphores hot similies... hot flow hot beat...you know....the whole shabang...but i liked it...good work

 

[linx]

A pretty hot beat indeed, i'm feeling the way that's sounding. Although the rhymes weren't the greatest, the song came out pretty hot. Dude got a pretty solid flow with an ok delivery.

 

[jeremy_]

nice beat, sounds like its made in "reason"? ... gets a bit boring though.

you have a good rap voice. not feeling the hook though, i always like a different voice coming in for the hook, changes it up a bit.

good track overall, solid flow... just needs a bit of excitement or more intensity perhaps because it sounds a bit flat right now.

 

[deazy]

Hmm, beats ait man, i dunno about that bassline tho, sounds a bit too synthesed for me - ya knw wat i mean? but then thats jus me. and yea it does get a bit repetative, it would help if you switched it up a little.
Altho that said, u got a cool voice, would be interesting to hear you rap about other stuff ya know? Coz the gangsta thing is a bit played these days.. but overall, good effort. 8/10

 

[Hussein Da Don]

beat was hot yo on the real

 

[IzzyWhite]

thats my label mate "Jay-Dah"

Tight track hommie..

Be on the look out for his solo.. FIRE!

 

[Zom-B]

Basically this is a dope song. The Highlights would be the beat and the delivery.

Chorus is great for the feelin of the beat & I don't feel the beat gets repetitive...I mean c'mon most southside shit is repetitive....I think it is a strength and just adds on to the feelin of the song.
Tho the mixin of the beat could have been made doper. Could have been other sounds...but thats just details. :thumb:

 

[Razorblade]

This type of beat is pretty common, especially with the lower level producers on soundclick - prolly cos they're not too complicated.

The point is, on a song like this it pays to really go all out and prove yourself better than most; presence is vital but you lack something on this. Since the beat its self is simplistic, you need to make up for it, make it interesting to listen to; you need to tighten the lyrics up a bit.
Although I aknowledge your use of similies and that, they're pretty weak.
Ur delivery and flow are hot, especially on the hook but you need to pull your game up as far as content is concerned. If you're making gangsta music, I'd recommend switching it up some how to break the mould - that's something to think about for the future.
Don't conform to the norm - stand out and keep droppin. :thumb: