Is Like... first verse

[crittaz]

replied to skitz and rukas. sumthing i started a long time ago.. and just picked it up today and finished a verse. lemme kno wat u guys think. gracias!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/crittazmusic.htm

 

[Mase]

Im feeling the beat. Your flow is a bit so/so at the start, but after the first couple of bars you start killing it. IMO, very good lyrics aswell, you have a section in the middle there where you just rip the beat with awesome lyrics . Produced well and the quality is good.
4/5.

 

[SkitzoFreniak]

nas beat is nice , seems that ur beat is a lil loud or ur vocals are
a lil too low , but thats easily fixed and the track isnt done yet
anyway , the lyrics are solid not alot of emotion , but it doesnt
need much of it ,maybe a lil more would be nice , flow is pretty solid ,
yeah u should finish this song
will be nice with these lil improvements imo ,pz

 

[imported_MAKaveli_10]

First off I gotta say that your flow is pretty good. Better than most. And your rhymes are good and the beat is pefect for your flow and song. Overall this song was solid.

 

[Ant]

Always loved this beat, I did a little thing to it ages ago.

Lyrics are nice in this, nothing too complex but they sound ok. Flow is alright, off here and there, and a little unconventional at times but it's cool. Sound quality is pretty nice too, I could here the wards nicely so good work on that. :thumb:

Overall it's an OK drop.

 

[Emma]

Hey Chris
Good beat, nice choice. Your flow is good, perfect at times but at the rare moment it's a tad bit off. Nice lyrics and it's good quality.

I like it good drop.

 

[Chronic]

Delivery shakey in the beginning, gets better though. Good internal rhyming (I love internal rhyming), the actual content is cool. Flow was good, lil shakey at some parts but overall it was cool. Good choice of beat, matches you but I think you gotta do a little less of the raspy voice style (does that make sense?), it makes the beat overwhelm you.
For the type of drop it is, it's good :thumb:
Haven't heard a weak track of you yet.

 

[Advocate]

hella feeling the day by day track btw,

classic beat, getting me hyped for the track, you sound really good on it, crazy lyricalness man, seriously you should be proud of the track in that aspect. two things, first is i agree with chronic about your delievery in the beggining it is a little shaky, but its nothing major, and second is if you could make your voice a little more "riding the beat" if you get me, i find it funny that im saying it because i have crazy trouble competeing with a beat, and i think this is a pretty hard beat to rap on, and i always love it when the beat cuts off for a few seconds, puts insane emphasis on the lyrics. i am really liking this too man, i want to see more of your shit. i also agree with chron, havent see you drop bad yet, keep it up man.

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[crittaz]

thx for the comments. much appreciated. i understand wat u sayin chron. rep to everybody. i will return the favor for ppl that got tracks tomorrow when i have time.

 

[Bigg Limn]

Beat is good, always dug this beat...add a intro or somethin tho if you're gunna do anything w/ this. Flow is solid, ur delivery fits the beat. Lyrics were nice 2, good multies. I wish you'd get a better mic though, cuz I'd be interested in workin w/ you, as well as hearing your shit with clear/crisp quality. Solid verse.

Peace