In The Air

Shot 21

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#2
Love this beat. Loving what youre all talking about. Deep Shit. Trips sounds convincing. Makes me feel it. I just really dont like the 2nd guys voice. Dont know why. Love what he says. Is it true what he saying? About his own cousin shooting him? You come in good. Nice flow. Ooh you saying some deep shit. Nice lyrics. Nice flow on Jamil. And it finished there???

Anyway liking this one. Love what yall are saying.
 
#3
i like the beat. its niiice. good to see crittaz back on some shit, FINALLY! get at me if you want to collab with me. i'd love to get you on something for my next mixtape, i'm trying to get a bunch of collabs, i just wanna showcase some other artists alongside myself. so let me know.
 
#5
1st Verse/Chorus - Trips
Good verse but not feeling his backing track, his flow is solid. He rhymes 'Homie' lots. Lacks a bit of intensity, and breaks in chorus are weird.

2nd Verse/Chorus - Dre
Stop start flow, but works. Weird slightly nasal voice.

3rd Verse/Chorus - Crittaz
Nice flow, feeling your lyrics too. You are the best so far. Your voice sounds perfect on this track. Not feeling this chorus at all though.

4th Verse/Chorus - Jamil
Real lyrics. Stopped half way through this verse for some reason so i didn't get to hear Coby.

Love the beat, will do something over it myself one day. Who produced it for Beanie?
 

Bigg Limn

Well-Known Member
Staff member
#6
Dont like the first verse...that typa scheme only really works well if U spit it smooth and he was pretty rugged on it. 2nd dude is a bit weak 2, flow a bit sloppy and delivery jus lazy. Hook sounds fucked up. Crittaz come in soundin nice over the beat, quality sounds better than the peeps b4 2. This is a perfect beat 4 u. 4th dude sound aite...lil problem with the breathe control tho. Verse starts gettin weak tho after the first couple of bars, gets lazy like the other dudes. And SoundClick has chopped ur song off...
 

tHuG $TyLe

Well-Known Member
Staff member
#8
I heard this before, and one of the dudes forget which one is flow is terribly off.

I liked your verse however.
 

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