He's Back ---> Future & Ne-Yo - So Sick (Red Yard Remix)

#2
beat is hot... talking over it at the start is not though hehe

hmm not really feeling your voice, althought i realize thats the type of track you are making. flow is pretty good.

wow, siging is really good, is that you?
 

Bigg Limn

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#3
Shitty ass vocals @ the beginning...damn...oh that jus the quality? damn, pretty bad, lotta fuzz. Flows aite, lyks a bit basic - delivery aite 4 the track 2. And Im so sick of this fucking song, but the hook/beat aint 2 bad. Shouldnt have given the bastard a verse tho. 2nd verse a bit worse than 1st, qualitys a lot harsher. Got potential but need 2 fix up the quality and lyks a bit.

pz
 
#5
Nice beat; you got a cool voice but that talking at the start just sounds tacky - like a kid with a tape recorder trying to be a dj (Dont ask how I know that...)
Your flow falters a little in places, like at some points it'll be rolling well but then at others it seems like you're concentrating more on staying on beat than what you're saying and your words lose their emotion.
Something to think about next time you're recording.
 

Cooper

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#6
Heard the beat loads....still hot tho....nice 1st verse, where ya from? Need to work on the levels tho. 2nh verse is aight. Don't like the talkin etc on the intro/outro.

:thumb:
 

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