Heat ---> Future & J-Deezy - Take It Off

#2
I love this beat....on Mariah Carey. I'm not really feeling Juelz Santana on this one tho. Regular Juelz flow but a little weaker (at least he didn't rhyme the same words over and over again). J-Deezy had an alrite flow but lost my interest almost half way through. Nice try flippers.
 
#3
hmmm.. u pretty much killed that chorus.
first: lyrics are okaay. nothing special. pretty plain actually. flow is arite on beat.
second: flow is arite. again lyrics are decent but are simple.

for the kind of track u guys were making it was a good track. but not the kind of track i like. the vocals sound kinda harsh. but ferril if u guys came more lyrical and on a better beat i think it would be fire. keep droppin. i wanna hear more.
 
#5
Mixing is needs work as does the quality and that's hook is downright offensive.
It's pretty boring to be honest; I'd try to rate your lyrics and flows but you're not doing youself any justice on this.
I'll look out for some more of your stuff and reply to that but I'd advise staying away from anything like this in future.
 

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