God Damn (Itz A New Day) f/Pharrell

[Malicious Jynx]

http://s51.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3HU6MZYXOPLWT0NVMYXTV5LJU8

Witness the debut, My first track for this board.....I replied to Sith Angel hoeniX CrookedCross - Lyrical Attack Part 2 (The WildWest) and Limn: Herbal remedy

Tell me what yall think........thanx

 

[True Thugz]

Whats up with that stutter in the beat before each verse? It's when Pharrell cuts off and you come in. Is it suppose to be like that? Coz it fucks up the track.

But anywayz...flow is nice and lyrikz are aiight man.
Outro is funny...

 

[Malicious Jynx]

Whats up with that stutter in the beat before each verse? It's when Pharrell cuts off and you come in. Is it suppose to be like that? Coz it fucks up the track.

But anywayz...flow is nice and lyrikz are aiight man.
Outro is funny...

Thanx man, and yo its how I got the beat it fucked me up too, I had to work around it. Good looks man

 

[MATW95]

Good choice for a beat
Good delivery
Lyrics are right

Shit is tyte man, keep it up :thumb:

 

[Bigg Limn]

Beats not bad. One of the only Neptunes beats Ive liked. Hooks aite I guess, a bit empty. Ur voice is pretty coo...reminds me a bit of Young Droop or Tall Cann. Flow is weird as fuck though...sounds like U just mixed in wrong but I dont think so. Its just weird...not on beat, bars R 2 short maybe. Lyrics R nicely structured, content is a bit old tho. Quality...cant decide if its horrible or decent. I hear some pops, not much...but it sounds a bit muffled - but that may jus be ur voice or may b if U normalized it or some shit iunno. Outros 2 long w/ all that talkin. Overall not bad...but that flow is just all fucked up [no offense, I jus dunno how 2 describe it - cuz U sound like U should be on[. So jus work on that and thatll elevate ur shit a lot.

pz