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G~Mile aka Ghettostar:Dapper Toe Tapper

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with the last song I posted I was trying to show how it's not hard to be a punchline rapper with this one I'm showing how to use big words in the right context...killen these jive turkeys!! Listen careful, pull out a dictionary do whatever, this might fly over your head. The other rapper is my producer/homie Ed aka Phaon.Replied to Crittaz and Rukas


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Oh I like it how u put your voices over the beat, it's dominant u know, not like someone is talkin in the background, you give the feeling of a "now I'm here u better listen" attitude...and I like that. Beat is fast but I like it. Over all a good work.
 
wow man this is dope! im guessing ur the second rapper? ur flow is dope, not really feeling the other rapper (ur producer) cant stand his voice lol

if ur lookin 4 beats or anything hit me up
 
Beats unusual but cool. Definite old school hint in the first verse. Makes me think of Naughty By Nature. Quality seems a lil low. The flow is pretty sicc. And yeah them words are very big for me. The other rapper sounds a lil corny sometimes.

Overall its pretty good. Keep it up.
 
Shot 21 said:
Beats unusual but cool. Definite old school hint in the first verse. Makes me think of Naughty By Nature. Quality seems a lil low. The flow is pretty sicc. And yeah them words are very big for me. The other rapper sounds a lil corny sometimes.

Overall its pretty good. Keep it up.
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thanx, my homie aint corny he just got that "beasties" goin through him. But thanx the song achieved what it was meant to do:thumb: :thumb: I thought the beat was really ill, almost Wu-Tangish in terms of the randomness. Thanx again'!
 
You have a really good flow, good lyrics too. IMO, tha beat is terrible, but I'm sure you like it, and that's all that counts. When I see a picture of you and then I hear your voice, to me it seems like you would sound different. I won't say what you sound like.
 
2PacThug4Life said:
You have a really good flow, good lyrics too. IMO, tha beat is terrible, but I'm sure you like it, and that's all that counts. When I see a picture of you and then I hear your voice, to me it seems like you would sound different. I won't say what you sound like.
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I don't know I look how I speak...I have a deep voice and people say I look like Luda who has a deep voice...so I don't know where your going with that...but I knew you wouldn't like the beat your too "westcoast" have to expnad your horizon man there's good music everywhere and given I feel this beat is very "Wu-Tang" (ie:Shame on a Nigga, Shimmy Shimmy Ya") type of deal then that might be why you didnt feel the beat. But thanks for the feed you gave me props on my flow and lyrics and that what this song and the rap game to a certain point is about.
 
beat is interesting. something a bit different.

finding it a bit hard to hear what you are saying.. second rapper too.

both riding the beat pretty well though. nice bouncy feel to it all.
 
yea i liked this shit... the beat was kinda different, wasnt my kinda beat id listen 2... kinda felt like a mario game or something... wasnt feelin the first rapper really... wasnt the right sort of voice i could stand for 2 long...

2nd rapper... was much better then the first... i liked the flow n the voice aswell with the track seemed 2 go nicely as the beat bounced along...
 
Outla Spirit said:
yea i liked this shit... the beat was kinda different, wasnt my kinda beat id listen 2... kinda felt like a mario game or something... wasnt feelin the first rapper really... wasnt the right sort of voice i could stand for 2 long...

2nd rapper... was much better then the first... i liked the flow n the voice aswell with the track seemed 2 go nicely as the beat bounced along...
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2nd rapper is moi and thanks for that man'
 
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Beats pretty hard, diggin the vibe. Not feelin the first dude, voice is annoying. U commin smooth as usual over shit...lyks nice - not feelin that abrupt stop b4 the minute mark tho. Hooks nice...levels need 2 be upped overall tho, ya vocals is way 2 low hard 2 hear U especially cuz ur voice is lower than other dudes. Pretty sicc shit from U and ur homeboy on the beat tip...not feelin his spitz tho. Stay up.

pz
 
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