Future & Wanted DOA - Wanted Dead Or Alive Remix

[future]

reply to deliquint and advocate

New track off my album/DOA demo...produced by J-Deezy and Deezy rapping 1st, rel 2nd and me last...feedback is apprecaited http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=3956678&q=hi

 

[Razorblade]

First off, thanks to J-Deezy for checking out my drop.

Beat's nice - like that "What" sample. Drumline's pretty tight and the synths on the hook are great.

J-Deezy's shots at fake rappers are nice; nice flow.
Rel's levels are a little too high; some nice punches from him tho.
Your flow's good and I like how you come in on this one. Lyrics are nice in places, like your opening, but played at others, like the money stacks to the ceiling line. Stick at it man.
Nice drop.
Keep 'em comin.

 

[Bigg Limn]

Beats not bad, real grimey street feel 2 it. 1st dudes quality is nasty, flows nice tho, goes good on this - could use a bit more bite 2 his verse but it aint 2 bad. 2nd dudes qualitys a lil clearer but levels is 2 loud and its clippin like a mafucker. More feelin in his verse, str8 flow 2.0. 3rd dude brings the track down a bit, totally different style - voice sounds way 2 soft 4 this typa track...U don't sound confident behind the mic. Flow was aite in parts but needs work overall. Yeah that beats hard tho, decent track Id jus work on ur presence more 4 real and ur shitll stand out more.

 

[A.B.R.]

Production was good, quality on the vocals was poor. I agree with a lot of what limn said. Flow could be better, and so could the the vocals.