Nice beat man. Although I get the feeling this is going to be a majorly cheesey song...
Flow's not that great but you lead into the hooks well. I think you need to work on the rhyming scheme for this track a little; there's some bars where you have too many words or too much going on and so the bar is really rushed and there's other parts where there aren't enough words in a bar and so you're kinda stretching out some words to fill time whereas you'd benefit more from throwing more in. Just something for you to think about but I have to respect that it sounds like you had a clear idea with what you wanted to do on this track which is important for an artist so well done with that man; think about dropping a different type of track next time so I can see how well you diversify.
Keep it up :thumb:
Oh and if you havent already; check out my track 'Genius'
