future - dreams (at the top) produced by brod beat

[future]

reply to mark deez and j83

sup ya'll? it's future again back with another hit....this one right here is produced by my man brod street beat factory who grew up in phili but then moved to the 'burgh...the track is pretty hot and samples some 80s track i think called sweet dreams...anyways lets get to the feature presentation there....future - dreams (at the top)....

Dreams (At The Top) (Produced By Brod Beat)
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=2993046&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=2993046&q=hi

music page...
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=394267


feedback is much appreciated cuz u know i'd give it to u...holla...

 

[future]

^up

 

[Hymnz]

beat is good, flow is ok and lyrics arent very good (decent)

 

[JRubb]

beat: i like this beat, the twist on it is pretty tight..

production: i gotta surround system so it sounds weird but cuz the way you panned everything on the left and right plus the normal setting, usually you only do that on the hook, but you got it on the verses too, kinda weird

hook: lyrics are simple, kinda catchy, but nothin great

lyrics: they decent nothin spectatacular

flow: your flow is pretty tight, kinda like mine sometimes, but u rush sometimes and dont pronouce words fully.. u should put more emphasis on each line instead of just flyin through the verses, idk if u know what i mean, ill explain more if ya want. but its pretty decent

overall: decent song, i like the beat alot but the song overall put together is alright, nothin spectacular, has potential 6.8/10

 

[Advocate]

not feeling intro it sounds a little dorky to me man

beat is allright, personally i could never rock it, sounds soundclick ish, almost like something shadowville would make.

not feeling the beggining,
"when im on the top going to have mad cream"

first verse sounds better, not feeling the doubled up vocals. lyrics are nothing spectacular, but your flow is dope, props on that for sure.

chorus almost doesnt seem to fit with the song, (how its put in, difference is style, tight chorus though)

"im the future, im already in front of you"
tight line

the bridge was a good idea for the song "im the future mayne, im the future mayne" but the voice you put on with it im not feeling

dope outro with just the piano and vocals.
in all honesty im not feeling the track so much, but i peeped other tracks on your soundclick and i've heard more concrete shit on there

keep it up keep it up keep it uppp
a

 

[future]

ight man...yeah thanks for the feedback, i'm glad u pointed out what you liked and what you didn't and im glad u liked my other shit...holla

 

[jflballer]

You're rhymin at 108-109 bpm. Twista could barely keep up w/that. SLOW IT DOWN. Stay cocky. I like that intro.