Esdee - Like Magic

#2
aiight mayne, I'll get at cha.
I'm not really feeling the beat. it's not my style.
but it kinda works for your style.
Hook, it sounds kinda tite, I think if you work on the singing shit, you can really be a real hot singer.
Rapping, You some nice delivery and style
I feel a lot of your lines, you got some nice lyrics in there.

Keep it up, Keep dropping.

Holla back on my new drop. 'Lifted Up'
 

Bigg Limn

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#3
Beats pretty nice, real repetetive - but basically its nice. Hooks not bad, illusion part is a bit fucked. Lyrics were pretty nice, simple but good content. Flow is solid, but don't like how U hold a lot of the words @ the end of a bar. Delivery is pretty solid as well. Pronounciation a bit jumbled in some spots but overall was nice. Pretty solid track, Id jus work on getting ur verses more filled.

Peace
 
#4
Like that beat; its got a lil something different to it - nice.
The hook is corny as hell; i dunno if you meant it to be that way. Maybe if you switched up the delivery or something but that's only my opinion.
Flow is nice; lyrics are simple but the message is there so that's cool. I like the second verse but you lose the effect on the third verse with that laughing part; sounds forced.
All in all, it's a good track. Keep droppin and if you could return the fabour...
http://www.2pacboard.com/forum/thread138930.html
Thanks
 

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