Daze Ya Crew -- Lets Do

#7
alright, it's the first time I've heard from you.
I'm not really feeling the beat. But hay, it's your choice.
I kinda like the hook, it reminds me of another song but I can't really put my finger on it at the moment.
The flows was good on this type of up-tempo beat. Lyrics was sharp. Like my bro YGB said.
Your not spitting jibberish, your spitting some real shit.
I like this track. I think the quality could be a little better but apart from that, shits tite.
Nice drop man. keep 'em coming.
 
#10
Funky beat - hook's good - Gangsta

1st Verse - Flow and delivery are hot as hell. Real strong presence. Lyrics are hard as hell. Likin it :thumb:

2nd Verse - I got lost between the hook and ur verse; u mite wanna have a harder impacting intro so that doesnt happen. Its not a big problem but I find presence on the track is important. Apart from that - nice flow.

Love the track fellas.
Keep em comin.
 

Xero

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#11
1st verse - wasnt feeling it a lot, no energy. aight lyrics. it was an alright flow, average.

2nd verse - it was tight, dope flow but adlibs fucked it up in many parts.

Hook is ok, wasnt feeling it a lot.
 
#12
not feeling the beat

your voice sounds really good on the beat though, good rapping voice period, not feeling the chorus too much, its sounding like a gangster type track, your vocals could be a little louder, missing some of the lyrics, but your flow is on, personally i think if you threw a little more energy into it it would be really dope, second verse is sound better production better, im actually warming up the beat, the track gets better as it gets on.

good work all keep it up furreal

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