fuckn hate these sites...
mixing sounds off from start...first verse dudes a bit off beat. lyrics r basic...same wit flow. hooks aite...need 2 make the singin louder as opposed 2 the rappin. 2nd verse...lil stronger on the flow; vocals r really badly mixed on this verse. 3rd verse ...how old is this kid 12 talkn bout fuckn? prolly the best flow on the track tho..jus needs some balls behind his flow [no pun intended]. autotune prolly shouldve been used more in the hook to make it smoother.
this would sound a lot better if it was mixed good...but still need a lotta work on flow, and then step ya lyrics up. keep elevatin
pz