this is my 16 bar verse that i laid down for the song my crew and i did earlier this week..the hook and the other crew members are'nt on here cause i wanted feedback on just my verse...thanks in advance to whoever checks out my shit
http://s53.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0BHBIQQVGTUJH2KGYCCOMEUMKO
it's not edited to perfection yet so if you couldn't catch something i said here's what i said in text...but i'd really appreciate if ya'll could listnen to the track so i can get some feedback on my flow and delivery and our choice of beat
big CASH...B.C. aka Nyce nigga...
i'm like any other nigga i'm tryna come up/
so i'm on the grind from night fall 2 sun up/
cars jewelry and clothes rocking a fitted//
if you ain't bout gettin money u got 2 get wit it//
determined 2 get rich i'm bout gettin them chips/
it's a grind like u out flippin them bricks/
money's real long when u gettin it quick/
even if rap don't work i ain't quittin this shit/
niggaz trained 2 be soldiers and want war//
but switch up when beef's brought 2 their front door//
i'm nyce on mics if u seek 4 da best/
like Miami did shaq you'll get da heat 2 ya chest/
da only burner u got is that ho u fuckin//
stop tryna act hard niggaz no u frontin//
stop fakin and hatin get yo money and ya mind right/
stop procrastinatin cause now the time's right/
http://s53.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0BHBIQQVGTUJH2KGYCCOMEUMKO
it's not edited to perfection yet so if you couldn't catch something i said here's what i said in text...but i'd really appreciate if ya'll could listnen to the track so i can get some feedback on my flow and delivery and our choice of beat
big CASH...B.C. aka Nyce nigga...
i'm like any other nigga i'm tryna come up/
so i'm on the grind from night fall 2 sun up/
cars jewelry and clothes rocking a fitted//
if you ain't bout gettin money u got 2 get wit it//
determined 2 get rich i'm bout gettin them chips/
it's a grind like u out flippin them bricks/
money's real long when u gettin it quick/
even if rap don't work i ain't quittin this shit/
niggaz trained 2 be soldiers and want war//
but switch up when beef's brought 2 their front door//
i'm nyce on mics if u seek 4 da best/
like Miami did shaq you'll get da heat 2 ya chest/
da only burner u got is that ho u fuckin//
stop tryna act hard niggaz no u frontin//
stop fakin and hatin get yo money and ya mind right/
stop procrastinatin cause now the time's right/
