Born ta die

[Y G B youngbugzy]

ya man,fresh out.
holla at ya boy.........
http://www.bugzyslife.com/music/born ta die.mp3
somthing a lil different.got me doin some harmonics.lol
~1~

 

[Y G B youngbugzy]

now that I listen to i think im re spit it...
here the lyrics..

the day that i died i said good bye when my sole fly'd
no more cry's or getting by with my four five
take my life , i sacrafice for my bloodline
dont ask me why, we all born to die

just another day so it seemed
escape me dreams & awake to reality
just as i exited my sheets
i stretch my arms as i hear the phone ring
holla holla who iz it now speak
it was some cat _ that i met last week
he was askin me who got some p'z
you gotta be crazy i dont know you like that
really please
serving feinds aint my thing
im the one behind the sceens
trying ta stay clean,naw i mean
we all got our downfall ,haters are mine
they should have roll call since they all
standing in line
thought i was st8 till the day that i died
some buster muthafucka ran up on me
shot me 3 times
did me dity too
ran up from behind when i was walkin in a Q
trying to get some chips and a soda,
i never seen them roll up
clerk thought it was a mu_fuckin hold up,
those punks
wanted see me cough up blood
no love as i caught 3 fuckin slugs
hit from buck shots out a mausgberg pump
them damn gun shots left my body slumped
evil ass game,torment and pain
never did i think i would die on that day
based on reality my theasiss is real
life is so complexd til that day that ur killd
basicly we hate ta see the stone garden grow
patiently we wait ta see as our life unfolds
not everything goes as planed but if you can
give a helpin hand &
never take life for granitt.......

the day that i died i said good bye when my sole fly'd
no more cry's or getting by with my four five
take my life , i sacrafice for my bloodline
dont ask me why, we all born to die

 

[Y G B youngbugzy]

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[Razorblade]

Like the beat right from the start.

The lyrics are pretty simple but the idea for the story is good. I'd advise gettin your lyrics into some format like 3 verses of 16 bars because your lyrics only take up a short part of the track.

Your flow is fresh but it slips once in a while, especially in that line about the mausberg pump and you need to sort out the levels because it's hard to hear you; I wouldnt have been able to tell what you were saying without the lyrics.

The drops good but you could improve it
Keep droppin and please return the favour

 

[Sith Angel]

& ANOTHER ONE! lol

Dame man, you keep coming with hot shit.
I've always loved this beat.
I think maybe the vocals could be a little louder but apart from that, shits hot man.
U know, I don't think you could drop anything I didn't like. lol

 

[Y G B youngbugzy]

Thanks for the honest feedback,
yea I have an unorthodox'd flow,but thats kinda my thing,
I hear ya tho...also your right I have to raise the vocals and mix it down cleaner..I rushed it..
thanx for takin time ta listen...
what up Sith, thats love,I always appreciate your feedback!
holla at ya boi so we can do a track...
~1~

 

[Mr Marz]

another hot beat right here. only thing i see wrong with this track is that ur voice just sounds too exaggerated, but u know i like ur style.

 

[Y G B youngbugzy]

thanks homie.
ya I actually want to redo the vocals on this one...
thanks for the love tho homie.
~1~