Ant - OnE

[Ant]

Rep[lied to ygB and Advocate

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/illantmusic.htm
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/illantmusic.htm

This ain't a deadly serious track, just something I did last night.

Feedback appreciated.

 

[Bill G]

It's nice to see you haven't taken up the habbit of ending every rhyme on the second snare, shows you can flow over a track without feeling controlled by the beat. But having said that you do come off beat a few times during the 2 and a half minutes.

The lyrics aren't really unique, it's nice for a freestyle but I wouldn't put this on an EP or a mixtape because there are no rhymes that really stand out.

The vocals are a bit distorted and sound weak (not as in bad, as in the opposite of strong). Try using some compressors and take some mastering lessons.

 

[Y G B youngbugzy]

I have to disagree this is a great song for a mix tape...
sound q does need to be cleaned up, but koo flow,nice word play...
this is a kool jam, has the nice and smooth feel too it.
~ygB~
~1~

 

[Razorblade]

Nice funky song with some real intelligent rhymes man,
gud drop
different but i like it
Keep em comin
Sorry my reply aint longer but Im in a rush here

 

[Bigg Limn]

Hey I peeped this last night, I gotta do some shit then Ima peep it again and give feedback and the other 1, so my bad for seemin like I ain't checkin ya shit. I'm just busy w/ shit and get 2 tracks when I can.

Peace.

 

[Ant]

No worries man. Thanks for lettin me no whats goin on. :thumb:

 

[SkitzoFreniak]

yeah the beat nice , seemed to slip at sum parts but u seemed
pretty much on point , didnt catch most of ur lyrics , but its
basicly about one anyway lol , this is just a song to bump
in the back , nice drop but nuthin amazing , keep em comin man

pz

 

[Bigg Limn]

Beats pretty nice, Ive had it liein around. Hook's pretty cool, I like how it fades in. Flow is pretty solid, yer flow is pretty solid but it slips towards the end...starts comming on and off. Pronounciation is real hard 2 understand for my uncultured ass to understand. Fade out was nice 2...sounded like you goin into another verse haha. Lyrics seemed a bit weak, a lot of the lines just seemed to be there to rhyme. But the structure itself was nice. Not that bad though overal...jus keep workin on that flow and shit.

BTW...at times U kinda sound like what John Lennon would've sounded like rapping lol

 

[Ant]

John Lennon lol? Guess cuz we both Northern lol.

Thanks all for the criticisms, any more?