Ant - Lazy Eye

[Ant]

Replied to Limn and Sith Angel.

Track called lazy eye, because I'm a lazy bassa. . I was kindof lazy with the song too to be honest. I didn't really finnish the last verse and I forgot to adlib... I may work to correct these mistakes in the neer future if I decide it's worth it.

Feedback will be appreciated, and taken into account in my future recordings etc

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/illantmusic.htm
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/illantmusic.htm

Ant - Lazy Eye.

 

[SkitzoFreniak]

beat is a lil "empty" , could be more added to it , ur flow
is okay , slurs a lil at points but its okay , the chorus needs
more emotion or maybe that suits the lazy subject lol,
cant really feel this song , the topic is a lil corny imo ,but
as far as flow its a good practise for ya and that wus the nice
part of the song

pz

 

[imported_MAKaveli_10]

I like how the beat comes in. The beat is pretty nice. i like how its is sooo simple. Your flow is good, and your rhymes are nice. The chorus is pretty good but I think that your could have done a better job. I like the subject you got going. This is a pretty nice song. 8 out of 10.

 

[Razorblade]

Been away for a while and you've really evolved since I've been gone.
The beat and your flow both match the content really well; lazy
It's a nice track man, really relaxed - its very easy to listen to as it is; you dont really need to add the ad-libbing in my opinion but it couldnt hurt either. The lyrics keep it interesting alone - there's enough of your personality present in the words, well thats my thought anyway.

Hot track; loved the outro.
Keep em comin man.
I have so much to catch up on round here!

 

[Bigg Limn]

Pretty good DEVIZE beat...although I don't like it as much as I did when I first heard it last year. Intros cool w/ the alarm. Flow is pretty solid...although ur accent @ times makes you speed up a bit, which makes the flow a lil choppy. Hooks aiight but gets a bit repetetive. 2nd verse gets real hard 2 hear cuz of the levels of ur vocals and the beat meshing. Lyrics were pretty simply structured, but I can relate 2 them lol. Outros cool lol Not a bad track, I would actually like to see more work put into this. Keep elevatin.

Peace

 

[Sith Angel]

The beats not bad, I remember rapping to it the frist time DEVIZE dropped it.
The flow like always is solid but I agree with Limn, you do speed it up in parts and it makes you sound a little sloppy on the beat.
the vocals need to be turned up a little in parts.
I feel the theme, I feel a lot of the bars. Lyrically, it's good.
Simple structure but it works.
I think you should add more to the hook, cuz just rapping a few bars over and over, it sounds repetetive.
I love the way you end it. lol
ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ! lol I like that
Keep it up bro. Don't forget to rep and holla back when I drop some shit.
Pz

 

[linx]

Yeah i'm feeling that beat, it sounds nice. I can't front, sometimes the accent throws me off and I be like "what did he say?" but that aint your fault, lol. I just try to listen closer and shit, haha. The verses were pretty nice, although I think you could do better. As far as the hook I wasn't feeling that all THAT much. It was kind of boring. Not bad, keep doin it.

 

[jeremy_]

really nice beat... starts really low.. i had to turn up my speakers.
nice concept, can realate lol.
lyrics are nice, flow sounds a little cloppy?
chorus is good, but would be better if you had a girl singing it i think.
def feeling the bit about writing at night...

really nice beat, concept and lyrics. solid, but needs a chorus singer and a bit more intensity i think.

 

[Hussein Da Don]

Nice beat man......chorus was aiight, could of been better...but keep at it home