Ant - Hold Me Down

[Ant]

Replied to Limn, Razorblade and Pheonix CrookedCross

Finally managed to get something recorded.
2 verses and the hook done. Check it and tell me what you think.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/illant.htm
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/illantmusic.htm

Ant.

 

[Mr Marz]

strange rhyme schemes, but i really like your style. your lyrics and flow fit this beat very nice. just make the vocals a bit louder maybe.

 

[Sith Angel]

shit, I've always loved that beat. U gotta huck me up with it.
Your style is really growing on me. I'm feeling the hook.
Lyrically I'm feeling you big time on this one.
Quality has improved a lot. I love this track Ant.
You got your self a nice little track here.

Dame nice drop. I give you props. Keep it up.

 

[Ant]

Sure, you got msn or sumthin? I'll send ya the beat.

 

[Tru Principle]

Chorus is great man, reallly catchy... vocals need to be highered a little bit though but great choice of beat...


Peace!

 

[Y G B youngbugzy]

yea ur flow is rather strange,I like that..sounds great.. the Q is rather good aswell..
good drop man.
holla holla
~1~

 

[Razorblade]

This is different - I like the way the beat builds; nice intro :thumb:
Love that line about "life is a weapon and I am the blade" - nice.
The content is nice; as I say, it's different: I like your angle on the genre.
Flow is refreshing - I'm becoming a real fan of your stuff man, you're showing alot of promise.
All you need is the right equipment and you'll leap foward!
Keep elevating!

 

[Twirlzy]

ANT, WHAT THE FUCK IS GOIN DOWN, UK IN THIS BITCH. I aint been here for ages, and thought id check it out, nice drop.

content ss real nice, and better than your older stuff. Nice deep stuff your speakin, 'My fear of rejection', chorus is real nice, catchy and simple. Quality is nice too, better than before christmas again too.

damn, iv'e had a few beers so sorry if reply is shit. how you doin pal?

 

[Advocate]

first thing i realize you could turn up your vocals because im missing some of what your saying.... sounds hot though, flow wise, it almost sounds like your distorting your voice a little or maybe its just the mic, but it sounds tight on the beat, the second verse is louder, flow is still on point, i agree with what other people said you do have unsual rhyme schemes but its good to hear someone switching it up and trying something different, im feeling the track man, looking forward to finished track..

advocate

 

[Ant]

Thanks for the reply's people. Yeah, rhyme schemes/flow was kindof different on this one. I'm still finding my style in all honesty. The next track I drop will be a missive contrast to this one. Called 'Parental Advisory'. That should be done soon.

Twirlzy - All good man... and yourself. You ain't dropped in a while, wats up?

Everyone else - thanks alot for the feedback, it's all massively appreciated. If I havn't replied back yet, I will do soon.

Oh and uppin for any more feedback.