Advocate - Revolution

[Advocate]

Replied to YGB and Ant

Another track, drop some critique, love, hate, feedback whatever do your thing. Props to Shadowville Productions for beat.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/advocatemusic.htm

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[Y G B youngbugzy]

whats up man..kinda the same thing you feel about my track.
your flow is there..kinda choppy, but it flows with the beat..
the beat is simple but its bangin aswell. and yea your sound Q is great also,overall,this another koo joint.
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[Advocate]

i know what you mean man
thanks for the post

 

[Bigg Limn]

Beat is alright...to simple though. Your flow is a bit choppy on this, on point most of the time; but also slips up a lot. And your pronounciation at times gets hard to understand. Your delivery sounds weak, too...not hearing or getting any feeling from it, need to work on that. Quality is clear, levels are pretty good, nothing overpowers nothing else. Yeah, you gotta work on your flow some more. Don't try to force it and don't focus to much on lyrics because, until your flow is crisp, what your saying won't really matter. I'm not saying don't concentrate on lyrics at all, I'm just saying make sure they don't effect your flow in a negative way. Don't create too long of bars, because that'll fuck with your flow as well. Some of the lyrics was pretty cool, like a liberating type of track, I like that. You're using multies which is good, but again, work on perfecting that flow before getting too complex with the lyrics. Keep elevating.

Peace

 

[Ant]

Beat is nice, gd choice. Lyrics are nice, and also,I like the sound of your voice so thats a good thing. Sound quality is also pretty nice. Flow is pretty wierd, I don't like that particularly. You getting gaps between words when their shouldn't be gaps just so you stay on beat. Need to switch up how many sylables you putting in your bars.

It's definately a pretty nice track tho, chilled out. I like.

 

[Advocate]

thanks all

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[alleyezonme0707]

The beat is decent, sounds mid-90sh. I really think you should have double-tracked your vocals on here. Lyrics are decent, nothing special. The quality is great but i think you should have rose them up a little beat. I'm not really diggin' the flow on this but it's cool thou. It's a nice drop, I can see you put a lot of effort into it, no hate, just not feelin' it much...

Peep my track Down To Do The Time Remix...Thanks...Future....

 

[Sith Angel]

I kinda like the beat, simple but it works.
Like every one has said, your flow is choppy. it sounds like you reading the lyrics as you flow. I'm feeling the lyrics, some real deep shit in there. I like that.
Quality is smooth and clear too.

its a tite drop. keep 'em coming man.
Holla back on my new drop. 'Never Do'

 

[Hennessy]

pretty coo on first listen bro, i'll get at this with some more feed later.

 

[Advocate]

i realize what most of y'all are saying about flow, i do need to work on that, but i did this track more for content

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[Razorblade]

Nice breezy beat.
You work it well with delivery but, in my opinion, it's a lil too lazy in that it can slowly drift into background music and I miss some of the stuff your talking about.
It's a pity too cos your dropping some real knowledge here but you'd need to rethink your delivery or getting a beat with more to it so the listener isnt drifting in and out.

Couldnt help but notice the line about Biggie - with that in mind, check out my drop (Im about to put it up)