Advocate - Nobody (Just realized Crittaz, sorry)

[Advocate]

Replied to Negative D and Crittaz

and i just realized that crittaz has a recent track with the same name, didn't see that until now

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/advocatemusic.htm

i still dont know how to mix (lol) so if anyone has any ideas on how to up the volume i would appreciate it crazy, i know its facking quiet

thanks all

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[Razorblade]

Ur hook is simple yet effective as is the beat. Nice.

I like your style, your voice is cool and your flow is good but there are times where I find it hard to hear what you're sayin. You lose a few words at the ends of bars every once in a while.

Content is good, I didnt like the whole "fuck ghetto gospel" part - not cos of what you're sayin' but your flow suffers, especially in the line "I'm not down with that".

Good track; it's dark and moody; lyrics are good - work on the flow and the mixing and you're good :thumb:

 

[SJUK]

like the beat, u got a great voice, no homo shit, but good drop, liked it

 

[Advocate]

thanks all

 

[Y G B youngbugzy]

not feeling the hook, the beat,fire!
simple but fire.. I like that shit, ur flow is aight...not bad,
but a lil slur'd,
production is good.
over another kool joint
~1~

 

[Nujeruz]

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i liked the piano and bass line of the beat.

your raps are pretty cool but i kno u can deliver a lot stronger and i mean relentlessly.....cuz u seem on point with a magenetic to the ear presence on tha mic.

keep droppin.

-Nujeruz

 

[Advocate]

thanks all, production credts go to "Shadowville Productions"

 

[Sith Angel]

it all sounds kinda flat to me.
I think it could be a lot louder
Lyrically, for some reason you remind me of common.
I think your flow and delivery could be improved but over all, it was nice track.

Keep 'em coming man, return the comments. on my MOB track if you haven't already.