Academic, Authentic, Future - Say Yes (Untouchable Diss)

[alleyezonme0707]

Reply to Razorblade, Ant & some other cats...

Sup ya'll? I dunno if you remembered, but back in January, there was some beef between my team, formerly known as Dynasty but now Last Regiment, and this car Infamous and his Untouchable cliq. Well, we finished this track right before the board was jacked and shit, and as you can see, I haven't been back much since. This track was recorded about a week or two after he replied back to me. Some of the team jumped on this and we ripped these kiddies... Here ya go...

1st Verse - Academic
2nd Verse - Authentic
3rd Verse - Future

Link www.purevolume.com/dynastyrecords

2nd track down on that shit...Holla with feedback or if you want replys (Untouchable boys)...

 

[Ant]

I feel if you wanna get serious dissing someone, you gotta realy get into them. Half assed diss tracks really don't work. And on this, the first verse in particicular sounds like it's just been mumbled. And I'm sure that I've heard that "Dot's on ya head like hindu's somewhere else tooo. Hmm not sure.

The beat is quit nice, like that and the flow throughout the track is pretty nice, though 3rd verse seems abit awkward.

 

[Razorblade]

Wasn't really feelin the opening verse; academic's voice was pretty bland and his disses were played; just talkin about shootin and calling people faggots.
The flows all over the place on the hook, especially on "Academic the gangster"
Authentic has a damn hot flow but I wasnt feeling his verse at all. It was medicore at best. There wasnt one diss that hit the mark.
This is more like a DMX track than a diss track. You know how in most of his songs DMX'll talk about killin someone some way but not actually talking to anyone in particular? That's kinda how this went; you cuda been talkin to anyone or no one for that matter. It's like Ant said, you really gotta lay in there, personal shit. Hit 'em where it hurts instead of just threatening them otherwise you risk the image of a fake gangsta.

Dont mean to put you down man, you know Im a fan. Just givin some advise is all.
Keep droppin.

 

[ygB]

First off .I aint feeling the beat...Idunno , my opinion its a sloppy dipset beat....I cant finger it,and i just dont like that eighty's feel in the vocals"the sample or hook" the flow is kinda solid..weak content tho,or maby its cause i just dont feel it, theres energy but it seems generic...again i cant finger it, sound Q seems,other than the mic distorting when you try to yell..needs adlibs or sumthin?,seems like an incomplete track,no hate homie but I just dont like this one.
dont get me wrong... you dudes seem to be doing ur thing...the last cat that flow'd had a koo verse...
hopeing to hear more of you cats.
~1~

 

[Sith Angel]

I don't really like the beat, it's a little sloppy for me.
I think Ant and Razorblade hit the nail on the head. If you gonna do a diss track you got to hit home. Do your research on the guy or guys you gonna diss.
Like me, I dissed a singer called Craig David. I went on to his website and looked at his Bio, hopped on to his message board and acted like I was a fan. Just to dig up dirt and find out things about him. So when I dissed him, I had info and personal ammo to fire at him.

I feel what you guys are trying to do and I remember the beef.
Maybe you could have done a impersonation of the guys. take things they've said and flip it around to sound gay or some shit. I don't know. but I think you guys could have come a lot harder with this.

The flows was a little sloppy at times but there's parts were it worked.
Keep working at it.

If you guys are gonna diss them again. I would recommend you do some research first so when you drop the bomb you blow 'em out the water. feel me?

Holla back
http://www.2pacboard.com/forum/thread129889.html

 

[Delinquint]

JD's diss was a lot nicer.

 

[Bigg Limn]

Yeah this beats pretty nice, I was gunna rock it. First dude has got a pretty solid flow, boring delivery tho. Hindu line is played. This whole was pretty weak lyrically, just a general battle track. Hook could be aiight if it flowed better, but its a good idea. 2nd dude is about the same level flow-wise as the 1st dude, but the delivery's better...more hungry. Lyrics R generic 2. And just a tip - nobody gives a damn how long it took you to right your verse, they just worried about quality - remember that. 3rd dude's kinda like Silkk the SHocka haha. Keeps meinterested, but flows all over the place. Need 2 control it if U gunna spit them bars quick. Alright start, but ya need 2 work on the fundamentals more before steppin to peeps, Josedy could rip ya'll - no diss intended.