Its not that good but hey I try!!! And the someguy one is Unfinished and Im too lazy to finish it to deal with it lol. Tips will be reallllllllllllllllllllllllllllllly welcomed cuz I wanna improve!!
http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2005-7/1040799/someguy323.jpg
http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2005-7/1040799/scan0001.jpg
http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2005-7/1040799/someguy323.jpg
http://img.villagephotos.com/p/2005-7/1040799/scan0001.jpg
They look good, you should finish the first one off then it might make more sense to me. Is the colour supposed to be like that?