Razorblade - Just Wanna Tell You (Bebo)

[Razorblade]

Hey,
It's been a while. I took time off over the summer to work on an EP; it's written and some tracks recorded but still unfinished. In the meantime, I've set up a Bebo band page and recorded a new track for the page. It's called "Just Wanna Tell You" so check it out.
All feedback welcome and appreciated.

http://razorbladeireland.bebo.com

I've replied to all the posts on the first page.

 

[alkaholik_151]

vocals and lyrics are on point as always blade.....production is cool as shit when that sample kicks in. anyway real creative lyrics man....keep em coming

peace

 

[Razorblade]

Thanks man, glad you like it: The beat is fuckin great, I agree. I downloaded it off soundclick ages ago - cant believe I never used it before now!

 

[7 Syns]

Great instrumental, lyrically creative and sharp. Vocals are mixed well, flow is solid and delivery is crisp.

Good shit. Let's hook up one day soon.

peace.

 

[Razorblade]

Thanks man, really appreciate the positive feedback. I'm up for a collab - any time you're ready, just drop me a line here.
Peace.

 

[killahill187um]

your flow is nice
beat is great

 

[Sith Angel]

Still sounding good bro
The flows is nice and smooth and the lyrics are tite.
My only problem with your tracks is your accent. But hay it's apart of who you are so it's all good.

keep it up bro.

 

[Lantz]

beat is real cool.
lyrics are cool, I couldn't understand all of it though.
flow is nice, the way you flow n pronounce stuff sounds almost like it's been reversed, deff interesting n original.
voice is cool, nothing great but has confidence n a good energy level.

real interesting joint man, keep it up.

later, Lantz

 

[Razorblade]

Thanks for the feedback guys; I really do appreicate it and I'm glad you all enjoyed the track. I'm feeling much more confident on the mic these days and I'm really starting to find myself lyrically and with flow so I have to say thanks to the people who've been here from the start, pushing me to improve. That said, I'm no where near the level I want to be at yet: none of us are ever finished evolving I don't think.

@PCC: HaHa, sorry you don't like the accent man but I can't help that. It's actually the closing lyric of the song:
The rapping represents an extension of the fella/
But if you dont like the accent I don't know what to tell ya/
If you ever want a collab by the way man, I'd be well up for it.

@Lantz: The advantage/disadvantage of being from where I'm from is that you have an accent that's very unique, in terms of the rap game anyway, which leads to the things you've already pointed out. Thanks for the in-depth feedback - really appreciate your taking the time out.