rant.

[7 Syns]

Rant.

For all the accomplishments we as man and woman have achieved, for all the knowledge we have gathered and used. For all the advancements in technology we have reached. We for the most part still fear the natural progression of life and death.

For some odd, strange and mystic reason beyond our comprehension we were sprouted in this world. We were given minds in which ration and reason were developed. We were given souls in which our individuality was formed. Oxygen, Water, Food and everything in between was given for free.

At some point of time we forgot all this and the natural balance of things in which we have existed in for millions of years seemed so alien to us. We take things for granted, we fight over petty situations, we hide our true selves from the world scared of the backlash.

Funny isn't it? The Gift of life ultimately is the curse of our demise.

The understanding of love is the greatest accomplishment in the universe.

peace.

 

[Dante]

Rant.

For all the accomplishments we as man and woman have achieved, for all the knowledge we have gathered and used. For all the advancements in technology we have reached. We for the most part still fear the natural progression of life and death.

For some odd, strange and mystic reason beyond our comprehension we were sprouted in this world.

for all the books and infinite sentences created thus far in the history of mankind, some of us cannot create a complete sentence, and rely upon poorly constructed sentence fragments in an attempting to express themselves in a manner that exceeds their intellectual abilities.

 

[Jurhum]

"in an attempting" ? ok mister I know it all.

 

[CoolWaterz]

no offense but this thread sucks.

 

[Rukas]

"in an attempting" ? ok mister I know it all.

Ermmm.... "In an attempting" is perfectly acceptable and grammatically correct.

So in your attempting to clown on Dante for allegedly not checking his grammar before attacking someone else's grammar, you in fact did the very thing that you accused Dante of and he in fact did not.

Hypocritical and fantastically ironic.

 

[Jokerman]

Water, Food and everything in between was given for free.

I've been paying for these things as long as I can remember. They've been free all this time!

 

[Dante]

"in an attempting" ? ok mister I know it all.

in an attempting is present tense, whereas in an attempt (if substituted here) is past tense. i was indicating that this is not an isolated (past tense) incident. thanks for trying though, and try to remember that the question mark goes inside the quotations next time, genius. oh, and commas go before the person being addressed. good to see you still have a boner for daddy.

 

[SicC]

wow, and fuck grammer.

pz