PhoeniX CrookedCross - The Pain Of A Gemini

[Sith Angel]

Just a little insight into my mind, my pain and stress of being a Gemini

I never really planned this out but I'm liking the theme so mush I'm gonna redo it for my album with all new lyrics and shit.


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/phoenixcrookedcrossmusic.htm

 

[Bigg Limn]

lmao...intros funny as hell. homos and what? Beats pretty cool...dark club shit.This is a step down from Unholy...flow is a bit sloppy @ the beginning of the first verse due 2 the bar length. I know what U was tryna do...but it was just a bit 2 sloppy. Lyrics were pretty solid as well. Wasnt a bad track, but the flow was a bit 2 sloppy. Be interested in hearin the final version.

pz.

 

[crittaz]

^^ agree with the beginning where it kinda went off. but u got back on beat right after that. its a pretty nice drop. not too much needed to fix it up imo but im sure it will be fire when u polish it up and redo it.

 

[SkitzoFreniak]

beat is nice once again , i have to agree also with the others,
the flow is not like ur usual level , second verse is better dough,
u once again brought nice heat to the song , maybe adjusting
the lyrics a lil would work out better , nice concept im feelin
ya there , since iam a gemini too lol

 

[Sith Angel]

yeah, I fucked up at the start cuz I came in to late on the beat and I thought it sounded alright so I didn't redo it. (I guess not. lol)
thanx for the comments. thanx guys.
Skitzo, I glad I'm not alone on this Gemini shit. Lol

 

[Mr Marz]

i had to play it back just to make sure i wasnt wrong but your shit is perfectly on beat homie. if this is off then i dont think it should be on. feelin unholy a bit more but this is on that level.

 

[Nut]

Sorry i gotta bring it 2 you but this shit sounds shitty. The flow is ok, but the lyrics and your voice are below average. I also didn't like the trance type of sound but that's just me.That shit needs work..

 

[jeremy_]

listening....
lol 2pac style intro...
feeling the beat
not really feeling the voice but the flow is good.
good concept.. feeling it over all.