Papa Graz - Step With Respect

[Bam_Margera]

What'chall think?

http://personalpages.tds.net/~mjvitek/music/Step_With_Respect.mp3

 

[Bhuddahhoodlum]

i'll over look the beat, which i didn't like, but that happens with most good artist.

as for the rap, i'm not feeling it. lyric's were cool, but something about the delievery just didn't move me. it's like i heard what you were saying, but nothing made want to listen. my guess is that you might not have enough emotion in your flow. your kept it on point with the beat pretty good. but nothing jumped up and grabbed me about the lyrics.

 

[Preach]

yea i agree with bhudda. the beat is hot, but it's an angry beat, and you need to be angry! instead of sort of speaking it into the mic, yell it into the mic. the lyrics are okay, but your flow slurs VERY minorly off beat on a word here and there, and some of the backing vocals don't fit your main vocal layers which again makes a couple of words sound like they're off beat lol.

if you re-record this with more passion, more emotion in your voice, i think i could rotate this. the beat is hot, the higher piano variation is dope.

i know you might take the "speaking into the mic" comment as disrespectful lol. listen, i'm euro, i lack some terms here and there. i basically mean, however much passion you put into recording it, you need just a little bit more. i'm basically trying to be difficult so you can improve.

and if you DO decide to re-record this, and you DO decide to post the re-recorded version up here, pm me? i don't come into this section of the board a whole lot.

 

[DemonThug]

I agree too, the beat is hard and you need come the same way..
it sounds like your reading it as you rap.
Re-record it and come harder and it'll be a tite track..

The other two guys has said it best..

Nice work, keep it up

 

[Bam_Margera]

i'll over look the beat, which i didn't like, but that happens with most good artist.
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Damn, homie, that's a new one. Around 200 people have given me feedback and you're only 1 of 2 people out of like 200 that didn't like the beat.

And, yeah, I agree with what the rest of y'all are saying about the emotion thing. It's not that I lack it... it's just that... I guess I haven't gotten comfortable just completely letting loose in the booth and feeling like I'm screaming. But... I guess I need to do that.

 

[BIG NASTY]

is this jason G? hahaha

 

[Preach]

It's not that I lack it... it's just that... I guess I haven't gotten comfortable just completely letting loose in the booth and feeling like I'm screaming. But... I guess I need to do that.

i feel that. you got the voice and lyrics though, so no worries, let yourself loose man

 

[Bigg Limn]

What'chall think?

I think you should read the rules, but thats just me.