My Weaknesses Are Only Shown When I'm Awake

[KMSinya]

My Weaknesses Are Only Shown When I'm Awake

I had a dream I was something
Woke up, came to my senses, and realized I was nothing
Why is it I'm happier when I'm asleep?
Where people respond and the symbolism is deep
In the land of the imagination where life never ends in defeat
I float around conquering every one of my fears and pay back my debts
I take this time machine back in time to redo all my regrets
For 7 to 8 hours I'm at my highest level of greatness
In the place where everyone is real and I sense no traces of fakeness
This is where I can reach out and be reached out to
This is the real deal
The vision is fuzzy and blurry, but the feeling is true and real
The worst moments of the day are waking up to this awake world and my fate
My charisma fades away and my personality breaks
I have no answers
No more indicators to enhance those answers
All I'm left with is questions and sins
With no one to look in the eye to confess em
I'll wait till the darkness falls to address em.

 

[Kadafi Son]

With no one to look in the eye to confess em
I'll wait till the darkness falls to address em.

^^Real tight way to end it. This poem was cool. I definately understand where you comin' from cuz these are a few of the reasons we all like to dream, if we can sleep. It was deep tho, not as deep as I would like it to be but being in tha mindframe where you know it's better to dream is somethin' that stands out to me. But its a decent 1st poem to post. Hope 2 c some more.

 

[ArtsyGirl]

Loved the way it flowed and that ending was great, thats the "say-no-more" kinda ending. Great poem, keep writing!

 

[*Riaz*]

Ok my girl read this and told me to reply,
She really liked this one-specialy the way it flowed etc

Nice work,Keep writing (for her)
She told me to add that in,sory guys

Pz

 

[KMSinya]

Thanks for the replies. I really do appreciate every reply I get.

 

[kman_69]

I had a dream I was something
Woke up, came to my senses, and realized I was nothing

^^awesome intro man.....like some killah priest shit...

really feelin this one man... cool idea...

keep it up man

peace