My Broken Heart

[jaimie.uk fan]

My heart feels broken the pain is their ,
times supposed to heal they say im living in despair .

Insucurities from my youth still burn , im fighting but not winning
i need to look at whats been said and start from the begining .

Words from mouth thats said to you theirs no pain to compare ,
i look at life with such mistrust the pain is always their .

You live to love its hard to give and nothing seems to work ,
i feel let down i hurt inside, ive no one to turn to , no where to hide

I sit here very lonely and feeling such a fool , the ones you love and
trust the most they always turn out cruel.

Treat em mean to keep em keen a wise phrase people say ,
but i cant be that cruel myself the games that people play .

I need to change they say to me if they dont theyll always leave ,
leave you hurting , crying wondering what the hell you should
believe .

I want to be held and kissed and loved , is it to much to need ,
until that day my time arrives my heart will always bleed .

Life goes on the pain still hurts , what will become of me ,
i sit here thinking of that love , that love i realy need .


FEEL A BIT SAD SHARING THIS AS I WROTE IT WHEN I BROKE UP WITH MY GIRL
AND FELT SO LOW AND DOWN 3 YEARS AGO - THE ONE I STILL TRULY LOVE . PEACE

 

[~live2tell~]

You expressed yourself well I thought, and put alot of your emotion into perspective.

I especially liked these parts >>>

I sit here very lonely and feeling such a fool , the ones you love and
trust the most they always turn out cruel.


I need to change they say to me if they dont theyll always leave ,
leave you hurting , crying wondering what the hell you should
believe .


Life goes on the pain still hurts , what will become of me ,
i sit here thinking of that love , that love i realy need .


Keep ya head up - you'll get there.

 

[jaimie.uk fan]

Thanks for the reply - very kind of you .

what i didnt say was that she died of meningitis aged 19 just after
we split up so i never had a chance to move on in that respect with having to deal with her death and everything , but i have moved on in the sense that im ready to meet someone else and am ready to love again etc . i just have her in my heart and always will , regardles whoever i meet in the future . i have never shown any one my poem before which is very personal so im glad someone made the time to read and reply - thanks again .

 

[xXHizzo.M40Xx]

"Insucurities from my youth still burn , im fighting but not winning
i need to look at whats been said and start from the begining"

... really feelin these lines, ive felt this pain B4. probably like many others, ive been there...
you've really showed your true emotions... sometimes when im overwhelmed with feelings i find it hard to right... but this is a heart felt poem... keep it up...

 

[Cown]

Very deep poem homie, and I'm very sorry to har about your friend life fucks you over when you least expect it

I really felt these parts from the poem:

I sit here very lonely and feeling such a fool , the ones you love and
trust the most they always turn out cruel.

Treat em mean to keep em keen a wise phrase people say ,
but i cant be that cruel myself the games that people play .

I need to change they say to me if they dont theyll always leave ,
leave you hurting , crying wondering what the hell you should
believe .

I want to be held and kissed and loved , is it to much to need ,
until that day my time arrives my heart will always bleed .

Life goes on the pain still hurts , what will become of me ,
i sit here thinking of that love , that love i realy need .

I can relate to this a lot, very nice piece of writting, enjoyed reading it, thanks and definatly keep writting :thumb:

 

[jaimie.uk fan]

Thanks for all the replys - im glad some people have read and kindly replied - thanks again .

 

[k69atie]

Wow, a great poem.very deep and emotional. keep up the good work

 

[shattered dreams]

man i wished i would of read that poem when you first put it on the board. Its the best poem that ive read up on the board. It is exactly what i always feel. i know exactly where you were coming from. Major respect for this one.

 

[Belo]

Thanks for the reply - very kind of you .

what i didnt say was that she died of meningitis aged 19 just after
we split up so i never had a chance to move on in that respect with having to deal with her death and everything , but i have moved on in the sense that im ready to meet someone else and am ready to love again etc . i just have her in my heart and always will , regardles whoever i meet in the future . i have never shown any one my poem before which is very personal so im glad someone made the time to read and reply - thanks again .

Damn.. I guess that makes it that much more meaningful and doesn't seem right to quote any one part of this poem
Only thing I could suggest would be check the spelling man.. but the poem itself was beautiful
A lovely dedication
Keep it up
Peace
Belo

 

[Buck_Buck_Bing]

Very corny

 

[jaimie.uk fan]

Very corny

how can it be corny ?? it came from my heart at a very low point in my life and is very personal . i never wrote it to show people and everything i said is how i felt at the time, i then decided some three years after writing it to share it on tb , your entitled to your opinion however , maybe you have never felt like this and cant relate but people who have been through it will know how i felt . peace .

 

[2pac4prez2006]

Very corny

like jamie said, its emotional and from his heart, it aint corny and its well written :thumb: