Mark Deez F/ Kool Daddy Deeske & Dr. Craig - You Can Holla

[Quasimodo]

www.myspace.com/markdeez

1st verse - mark deez
2nd verse - kool daddy deeske
3rd verse - dr. craig

drop some feedback

 

[Razorblade]

Flow's off a little off in places. Lyrics are what you'd expect from this type of track but I think it's good to delve into all types of tracks just to maintain versatility.
Dr. Craig seems outta place on this one; his flow's too lazy for the track but that's just my opinion.
As a whole, I think there's something missing from the track. I think it's the beat itself really; it doesn't fit for this type of song and it's not lively enough to be a club track but again, that's just mey opinion.
Keep 'em coming.
Check out my drop - Cheers.

 

[Quasimodo]

my flows off? doesn't sound off to me, but ohh well, i appreciate the feedback. dr. craig is a bit monotone, i might have him taken off & another feature put on.

 

[Simon]

Hey man,

Your vocals are way way to loud they totally overpower the beat, which makes it sound unpolished and not too professional.
As far as your flow, i thought it was good; sound natural on the mic, not my sort of thing as far as lyrics, gangsta and played out all been done before.
But nice solid track, you've got the tools but try some more orginal stuff.

 

[Razorblade]

Your flow isn't all over the place or anything; it was just a few small instances I noticed it faltered. Can't remember right now man but I felt it was noticable enough to be mentioned - didnt make the song sound bad or unlistenable or anything you understand.