JeSTAR - Cold Turkey (SOUNDCLICK)

[jeremy_]

Replied to Crittaz, Minardi

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=221700

Cold Turkey (Verse 1)

 

[Bigg Limn]

Beats kinda weird...thats an odd sample iunno. Not bad tho, good feel 4 it overall. WTF is that swoosh noise tho. Flow is pretty solid, but still pretty basic. Good feeling in the verse tho, nice delivery. Nice lil verse.

 

[Shot 21]

Beats nice. But its a bit too loud. Or your lyrics are too quiet Hard to hear what youre saying . Sounds sicc though. When you finish it sort that bit out and you might have a hit.

 

[B.Lorenzo]

Production needs to be a lot better, lyrics were average but your flow was steady. Maybe if the production was better the track would sound a little better....

 

[crittaz]

good idea for the beat.. but can be made much better.
flow is pretty good but like limn said its basic. pronunciation could be worked on a little bit but overall its a nice verse. i wanna hear the finished product