Heartless (soundclick)

[Min]

i know that i aint been for a longer time, but a last time my shit had no replys...so sorry if i did it wrong way....

my last made song...dedicated to Randy Walker

HEARTLESS

 

[LilProphet]

Well it sounds nice, your voice is cool, but please don't try to be that hard... Oh and nice beat.

8/10

 

[Min]

thanks man...i aint that hard life is...

 

[Razorblade]

There's no real flow to this so far this I can hear and your delivery needs work; it sounds like you're running out of breath really quick because the last words trail off on almost every bar. But my real problem with it is the lack of flow; you're just reading the lyrics out angrily but there's no rhythmn to it or anything.
I'd say give it another go but write along to the instrumental this time so that your lyrics fit the beat properly.
Keep at it man.

 

[Razorblade]

There's no real flow to this so far this I can hear and your delivery needs work; it sounds like you're running out of breath really quick because the last words trail off on almost every bar. But my real problem with it is the lack of flow; you're just reading the lyrics out angrily but there's no rhythmn to it or anything.
I'd say give it another go but write along to the instrumental this time so that your lyrics fit the beat properly.
Keep at it man.

 

[Sith Angel]

my boy Razorblade said it the best.. it's the flow or the lack of it..

it's a good 'test' track.. keep working on it, you can only get better!

Holla back with a reply to my new track

 

[Min]

thanks both of ya,
shit i thought that flow goes with this beat....maybe i just listened to words too much didn't paid attention to beat that much...

 

[killahill187um]

good beat
drums could be little bit louder