German Rap: SlikK Tha Rapper

[Yung Xyal]

This is my german rap.. i wud like to get some feedback on it.. thnx in advance

www.myspace.com/slikktharapper

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[Rahim]

was the band name influenced by the artist "Silk The Shocker" by any chance?

 

[Yung Xyal]

no lol... its sLikk not sIlkk.. and im only 1 rapper

 

[Sebastian]

Nice lyrics

Hardcore yeah. Thug life.

 

[Chronic]

Your feedback for other rappers should be more extensive. Don't just say "good/bad song", give feedback on the flow/lyrics/delivery.

As to your song, the flow seems alright, delivery is a bit bland, can't comment on the lyrics.

 

[scarfoe1]

I don't understand German but it sure sounds like the german version of that Jim Jones. Quality is kinda bad on this. I give this song a 6/10