Diss a member in a short 8 line rhyme (Round 2)

[AmerikazMost]

Round 1:
http://www.streethop.com/forum/showthread.php?t=165396


No fucking freeposting in this one. Keep your beef to stanzas. Stop being whiny bitches.




My post from Round 1, which had no chance to be replied to:

Had to add to the thread 'cause all these lazy disses bore me
Don't know all the seven sins, but I know one who's lustin' for me
Bet Street Hop didn't know that the board had a male slut in this
Eats more dicks than his fill, guess you could call him gluttonous
Outshined in his own thread again, and I can see the envy
Not to sound angry, but lyrically to hell I send thee
Now don't get greedy 'n' come with somethin' that's not profound y'all
It's tragic, but hubris can lead a hero to his downfall

 

[Saint33]

Saint is still untouchable

 

[Tru Principle]

Man some people are hypocrites and losers
Full of shit, I shoot ya' Suck a dick and move son
C`mon man, be real you're more bitch than a chick
Talk about "Mercy" mutha fucka, ill empty the clip
If this wasn't the internet, well lets be happy it is
Start with you, and then finish off your family bitch
You act hard just because you have a little power
Well I was gettin' my dick sucked from your girl in her shower

 

[P.U.]

It's funky, funky, funky but I ain't Dre
When I kick in the door you suckers lay
Down on the floor, step in the door
All I heard was P.U. don't hit me no more
But I reply back with lyrical attack
If you are a hoe then I'm giving your ass a smack
If you are guy then being straight is what you lack
Who I be? Gangster, Pimp, Hustler, Mack

 

[Dante]

Somone teach this hip hop retard how a god damn verse goes,
It's about rhyme flow not some bullshit def poetry slam prose.
I wonder what Canadian schools teach their youth anymore...
Act American, stalk whores, eat snow, be a bitch and don't fight wars.
I swear to ALLAH brother, your beats straight sound like fuckin' redial,
We all smile when you freestyle because your head is like a fuckin' rock
Go cry for attention in MixEmUp and get the fuck off of Our Block.

 

[PuffnScruff]

peter dante cant even spell my name right
but compared to rahim, he's alright
speaking of rahim, he got the other thread closed
he's a crying, stalking, walking, ticking time bomb
what he didnt tell you about that girl was that he proposed
when she said no he turned to his only myspace friend, Tom
rahim you are just gay
please leave the board and make everyones day

 

[GhettoStar]

Somone teach this hip hop retard how a god damn verse goes,
It's about rhyme flow not some bullshit def poetry slam prose.
I wonder what Canadian schools teach their youth anymore...
Act American, stalk whores, eat snow, be a bitch and don't fight wars.
I swear to ALLAH brother, your beats straight sound like fuckin' redial,
We all smile when you freestyle because your head is like a fuckin' rock
Go cry for attention in MixEmUp and get the fuck off of Our Block.

hahaha missing a line though

 

[Dante]

my family was poor so we packed up, moved to canada
pops doesn't work, but my moms is a night managa
no skills or education so they signed me up for drug trials
now i'm earning bread for the house so pops is all smiles
wish my nuts hadn't dissolved testing tylenol four
cause when she's done doing other guys i can't fuck my whore
nooooooo, brother, if i'm patient ALLAH will look out for me
nevermind that when we fuck i'll get the itch, syphilis, and h.i.v.

 

[Tru Principle]

Somone teach this hip hop retard how a god damn verse goes,
It's about rhyme flow not some bullshit def poetry slam prose.
I wonder what Canadian schools teach their youth anymore...
Act American, stalk whores, eat snow, be a bitch and don't fight wars.
I swear to ALLAH brother, your beats straight sound like fuckin' redial,
We all smile when you freestyle because your head is like a fuckin' rock
Go cry for attention in MixEmUp and get the fuck off of Our Block.

HAHAHAHHA LOOOOOOOL :woah: OUCHIES

peter dante cant even spell my name right
but compared to rahim, he's alright
speaking of rahim, he got the other thread closed
he's a crying, stalking, walking, ticking time bomb
what he didnt tell you about that girl was that he proposed
when she said no he turned to his only myspace friend, Tom
rahim you are just gay
please leave the board and make everyones day

HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAAH
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA LOL :laugh:

my family was poor so we packed up, moved to canada
pops doesn't work, but my moms is a night managa
no skills or education so they signed me up for drug trials
now i'm earning bread for the house so pops is all smiles
wish my nuts hadn't dissolved testing tylenol four
cause when she's done doing other guys i can't fuck my whore
nooooooo, brother, if i'm patient ALLAH will look out for me
nevermind that when we fuck i'll get the itch, syphilis, and h.i.v.

:laugh: haahhah lol

 

[Tru Principle]

Rahim I see you a little on the mentally incompetent side
So I can't really judge you, aaah... fuck it get off our block and die
You claim we don't know the whole story, yo' I think we really do
Fucking delusional and obsessed so its no wonder you wanna kill me too

I suggest you click on the link I gave you and see a Psychologist
I'm tempted to hack in to your msn, but why involve this bitch
It ain't her fault that you're obsessed and you're a sad little fuck
Go kill your self, you gluttonous psycho with dissolved little nuts

 

[Dante]

dissolved little nuts

the continuity is dastardly

 

[Tru Principle]

You're an idiot, a half-wit , an imbecile, a cretin, a retard
It would be a humanitarian mission for me to make you bleed hard
Please you little pussy, attack me one more time you'll get smacked
With no nut sack, it was nothing for you to get murked by DubSacks
So props to Dante for killing you, now I gotta take you to the morgue
You're delusional, must I say it again you're an emotional whore
Providin' services for a chick that sees you as nothin' but a friend
Hell I even doubt she likes you, but knowing that would be your end

 

[Diaz]

Hi my name is Rahim, if you mention me or threaten me,
its not a joke cuz children messed with me in elementary.
Dante I respect you, I'm not trying to diss you,
but why haven't you solved the Diaz, Kamikazi, Big mac issue?
The girl I like has a man but who cares if he cums in her,
I'll sit around for several years and wait until he's done with her.
The truth is I'll be single til I marry a casket,
even Allah thinks it feels good to bury a faggot.

 

[Tru Principle]

Ok, Diaz just won the battle man.. for real, thats a fuckin dope ass rhyme you little dude you!


Rahim fuck you

 

[Tha_Wood]

was it rahim that got the other thread closed?

 

[PuffnScruff]

was it rahim that got the other thread closed?

it was his big ass same old thing over and over again redundant rant that got it closed so yes it was rahim

 

[ill-matic]

wow.. i dont think rahim will be posting here anymore..

 

[Tha_Wood]

wow.. i dont think rahim will be posting here anymore..

we can only hope

 

[P.U.]

blah blah blah my rhymes tight
i dont have to make sence to sound right
i just ate a fucking whale hows that
then i hit amerikazmost with a motherfucking bat
all women are sluts, especially my momma and your mother now what?
i dont give a fuck, im str8 nut, kiss my hairy butt
or suck my dick while im pissing, twisted
check streethops most wanted im listed, eh well im not but who cares

 

[Pittsey]

Closed. The topic is boring me. Please leave Rahim alone.

Tip - Click Ignore, Or I click ban.