Close To Perfection

[crittaz]

Replied to jeremy and shot 21
Heyyy back with another one. Heres the order
1st Verse: Coby
2nd Verse: J-Mil
3rd Verse: Crittaz
Hook: Coby
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=75350
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=75350

oh i got some news in about a month or two me and a couple people are throwin a concert at my university. when that happens ill try to get a video up on here. anyway any feedback is appreciated.:thumb:

 

[B.Lorenzo]

The beat was simple but I liked it a lot. I wasn't feelin the hook but yall did yalls thing on the lyrics, nothing overwhelming but it fit the song and the beat perfect overall a solid track to me....

 

[Advocate]

i was feeling the track. i appreciate your in a group and do tracks with your boys but personally i feel your solo efforts more.

up the video if it happens, would love to see it

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[jeremy_]

Pretty basic beat but it works...

1st Verse: Coby
Not really feeling this guys flow, sounds a bit choppy. His lyrics are OK, a bit cliché, but I guess it is that type of song.

Hook: Coby
Hook is ok, need a bit more energy or something I think.

2nd Verse: J-Mil
This guy flows a bit better but nothing amazing.

3rd Verse: Crittaz
Whats with the extended hook before your verse?. This is the verse I have been waiting for... best flow, best voice. You are so much better then the guys you are working with recently. Still, I think you have flowed much better then this before, perhaps its the beat.

This track is alight overall, but would have been much better if it was Crittaz solo and something a bit different for the hook.

Performance sounds interesting - good luck with that.

 

[Shot 21]

Yeah man beats simple but catchy. Coby flows it well. Nice chorus. Dont really feel J Mil. You got a sicc verse. Flows runs away a bit but overall good. Nice subject.

Thats a good track. Keep dropping.

 

[tHuG $TyLe]

Crittaz >>> rest of the guys.

Man you outshine them...

 

[Saaphir]

Smooth shit!I like it!The beat is nice.

 

[Mr Marz]

beat and feeling is nice, but it dont sound like yall are feelin the beat too much.

 

[Bigg Limn]

yeeeeeah i love this beat. lmao first dude almost soun exactly like Common @ first. Flow good and delivery solid, solid verse. Hooks aite, a bit empty tho...sounds kinda half-assed. 2nd dude- wtfs up w/ that static behind him? Not as good as the first dude, but pretty solid...jus a few fuck ups in the flow/pronounciation, and wasnt feelin his delivery as much. U definately fit this track w/ ur voice/delivery. Flows pretty solid, altho it sounded a lil bit iffish on the parts where the drums dropped out. Pretty solid track, other than that static and shit