Art of War

[BiggerL]

Yo this is a song from two of my mates who rap as "Taktical" just wanted to see what people hear think cos I thought it was pretty hot. Feedback would be greatly appreciated, peace.

http://s47.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1GPEPDAJW13000O1ZASU2U09ES

posted feedback to Limn & JeSTAR

 

[Bigg Limn]

Beat is werd as fuck...dont like it that techno shit. Cant make out the lyrics...levels 2 low, quality a bit muffled/poor...hearin somethin bout jedis, conartists, cervex? dunno...flows sounds decent but again hard 2 make out...dunno...up the quality and keep elevatin.

pz

 

[BiggerL]

The beat is different your not wrong. Maybe you didnt understand the lyrics cos I thought they were pretty clear I will try & post them. Hopefully others will drop feedback peace