Ant - Man Behind the Bars

[Ant]

Replied to YGB and Advocate...

Man Behind the Bars, I did this today, as usual I rushed it abit, I'll probably re-do this when I've learnt the lyrics and don't have to read them while I'm spittin'.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/illantmusic.htm
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/illantmusic.htm

Any feedback is greatly appreciated and will be returned.

 

[SkitzoFreniak]

nice oriental sounding beat , flow rushed a lil but still the flow
is nice , emotion good on it , i think this is ur best track
so far , keep em comin

 

[Y G B youngbugzy]

damn..this is a great track...
I like the flow ,beat..very good....
I agree this is the best Track I heard from you so far..
I love this joint.
~1~

 

[Jmall2000-Forever]

This has nothing 2 do w/ the track, although I read ur reasoning as 2 why.

 

[Advocate]

hey ant

im agreeing with what Skitzo said about the flow sounding a little rushed in the beggining, but apart from that i cant find anymore critcism.

you have an interesting flow and voice, the flow is consistent, its nice man, this is my favourite i've seen from you. i like how you end the track, the last bars im really feeling same with the "a a" lol

keep it up A-n-t

a

 

[Ant]

Wow, really didn't expect good feedback from this, I wasn't even gonna put it up.

Thanks fella's.

More more more...

 

[Ant]

God this place has been dead for a few days...

uppin.

 

[Sith Angel]

yeah, I've freestyled to this beat so many times. Did you cut it up? cuz it sounds kinda tite. Dame, I'm feeling the theme. I swear to god a did a song back in 2000 with that. 'A man locked up behind the (rap) bars' lol

The Q is real tite. it's true, it sounds like your rushed it at the start but you slip into the beat nice and you staying flowing real nice. I think this has to be one of the best I've heard from you man. Dame good job.

"I'm a big fan of the '90s west coast hip-hop" yeah I'm feeling that
I love the hook

 

[Ant]

Yeah, I just looped the start of the beat. I was only really feeling that bit.

Oh, and I didn't hear your 2000 stuff, not biting, honest.

 

[Sith Angel]

I know. it's cool. lol
just shows we think kinda the same way. it's all good. :thumb:

 

[Bigg Limn]

Beats pretty cool, good lil loop - doesnt get real old. Lyrics arent that strong, but they work well with the subject. Flow is pretty solid. Accents a bit overpowering, I'd try workin on ur pronounciation a bit more. Pretty decent track...I'd just work on pronounciation a bit more, and more complex lyrics. Quality was pretty clean 2.

pz